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When I look at Korean news, I saw many cases of teenagers swearing in the games and going to school to find and assault people. so I think that violent games can change a person's personality. And there are many similar incidents of gun shooting in the US as well. I think adults should always care and teach them. Because teens lack the ability to control their own behavior.
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- Teacher Angela


When I look at Korean news, I saw many cases of teenagers swearing in the games and going to school to find and assault people. 
>> When I look at Korean news, I see many cases of teenagers swearing in games and then going to school to find and assault people.

so I think that violent games can change a person's personality. 
>> CORRECT
And there are many similar incidents of gun shooting in the US as well. 
>> And there are many similar incidents of gun shootings in the US as well.

I think adults should always care and teach them. 
>> I think adults should always care for and teach them.

Because teens lack the ability to control their own behavior.
>> CORRECT