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When was the last time you went to a good restaurant? What did you have?

김영순/2024-05-31

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My husband and I like going to a Japaneses restaurant named " THE SUSHI". Two weeks ago,we went there, had a sushi set menu made of raw fish, shrimps,calms,salmon,grilled eel and fried egg. We also added Japanese Miso soup and Udong. We enjoyed eating them.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Young Soon!

You did a good job here.

Your sentences are correctly structured.

Please keep it up.^^

~~ Teacher Sharon

My husband and I like going to a Japaneses restaurant named " THE SUSHI".
>> Correct
Two weeks ago,we went there, had a sushi set menu made of raw fish, shrimps,calms,salmon,grilled eel and fried egg.
>> Two weeks ago, we went there, had a sushi set menu made up of raw fish, shrimp, clams, salmon, grilled eel and fried egg.
We also added Japanese Miso soup and Udong.
>> Correct
We enjoyed eating them.
>> Correct
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