POWER ENGLISH

현재위치

> 영작교정 첨삭 서비스

장지혁/2024-05-31

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I agree with Ezra's opinion because I want to eat with my friends. I can talk with them. That is always fun and I can bond with them

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Henry!

I can relate to what you said. It's more enjoyable to eat with your friends.

Good job! ^^

~ Teacher Maxine

I agree with Ezra's opinion because I want to eat with my friends.

>> I agree with Ezra's opinion because I enjoy eating with my friends.

I can talk with them. That is always fun and I can bond with them

>> I can talk with them, which is always fun and helps us bond.