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류건우/2024-05-31
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: What are some reasons why people lose sleep or skip meals?
A: I think it's usually not their decision, but if it is, then it might be on purpose.
Usually people lose sleep because they do something else during the night, and they skip meals for their diet.
But I think they usually lose sleep and skip meals not because they wanted.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. Usually people lose sleep because they do something else during the night, and they skip meals for their diet.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~t. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. I think it's usually not their decision, but if it is, then it might be on purpose.
>>CORRECT!
2. Usually people lose sleep because they do something else during the night, and they skip meals for their diet.
>>Usually, people lose sleep because they do something else during the night, and they skip meals for their diet.
3. But I think they usually lose sleep and skip meals not because they wanted.
>>But I think they usually lose sleep and skip meals not because they want to.
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