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Which place in Korea is the best place for a spring vacation? Why?

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I think the best place for a spring vacation in Korea is Han river, because it is very cool and beautiful. When boat is passing, it's very cool when take a picture. Eating Ramen at Han river is very delicious, and it's truth.
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                   Which place in Korea is the best place for a spring vacation? Why?


I think the best place for a spring vacation in Korea is Han river, because it is very cool and beautiful.
>> I think the best place for a spring vacation in Korea is the Han River because it is very cool and beautiful.

When boat is passing, it's very cool when take a picture.
>> When a boat is passing, we can take cool pictures picture.

Eating Ramen at Han river is very delicious, and it's truth.
>> We can eat delicious ramen at Han River and it's the truth.