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안재윤/2024-05-30

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hello, I suddenly came up with the thinking that you are going vacation next week, and also had to change my time... so I just decided to try other time, thank you very much for helping me improve my speaking skill, it was pleasure to being your students! hoping you have a great trip with your daughter~~!
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Hello Anna,


There is value in allowing yourself to learn, even if the task is not accomplished as quickly, efficiently or effectively as you expected. You can get things done if you do have the courage to do so, but most importantly, you should allow yourself to learn new things and build your confidence that you can effectively open the door to success.

T. Jeny


hello, I suddenly came up with the thinking that you are going vacation next week.
>>Hello, I suddenly came up with the thinking that you are going on vacation next week.
and also had to change my time...
>>correct
so I just decided to try other time,
>>correct
thank you very much for helping me improve my speaking skill,
>>Thank you very much for helping me improve my speaking skills.
it was pleasure to being your students!
>>correct
hoping you have a great trip with your daughter~~!
>>correct
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