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Who was your travel buddy when you were not married yet?

김병욱/2024-05-30

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I have 7 friends of high school. We usually go to travel in annual . 5 members of friends already got married. But travel is very short term, just one days. So there's wifes permitted ours annual travel.
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Good day, Dan!
It is great to hear that you have friends with whom you traveled and that you are continuing your habitual trips.
Thank you for always doing your homework.
Aki~


I have 7 friends of high school.
>>> I have seven friends in high school.

We usually go to travel in annual .
>>> We usually travel annually.
>>> We travel annually.

5 members of friends already got married.
>>> Five of my close friends are already married.

But travel is very short term, just one days.
>>> So our travel days have shortened to one.

So there's wifes permitted ours annual travel.
>>>  And our wives, permit our annual trip.
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