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What are the nonliving things?

박준현/2024-05-29

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

There are Rock, fossil, and excreta. First, Rock is in the Perpation part. And, Fossi is a animal's bone is hardened. Lastly, excreta is I have no ideas. Do you have another ideas? These are the things the nonliving things.

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Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

There are Rock, fossil, and excreta.

>> There are rocks, fossils, etcetera.

OR >> There are rocks, fossils, and many more.

First, Rock is in the Perpation part.

>> First, rocks were mentioned in the Preparation part.

And, Fossi is a animal's bone is hardened.

>> Second, fossils are hardened animal bones.

Lastly, excreta is I have no ideas.

>> Lastly, I have no ideas.

Do you have another ideas?

>> Do you have other ideas?

These are the things the nonliving things.

>> These are examples of nonliving things.