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류건우/2024-05-29
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Q: What makes a party memorable for the people attending it?
A: I think the events in the party makes it memorable for the attendees.
If people attend to a party and it's just as usual, then it wouldn't be memorable, but if it has a creative event, then it would be memorable.
Also, I think who they're with affects the party.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. If people attend to a party and it's just as usual, then it wouldn't be memorable, but if it has a creative event, then it would be memorable.
3. Also, I think who they're with affects the party.
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some considerations:
1. I think the events in the party makes it memorable for the attendees.
>>I think the events in the party make it memorable for the attendees.
2. If people attend to a party and it's just as usual, then it wouldn't be memorable, but if it has a creative event, then it would be memorable.
>>If people attend a party and it's just as usual, then it wouldn't be memorable. But if it has a creative event, then it would be memorable.
3. Also, I think who they're with affects the party.
>>CORRECT!
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