The best birthday gift I received is LEGO robot that my mother and father bought me, because I wanted to have for a long time. Second, my uncle gave it to me, the gift is a green drone, because I can control it myself. Third, it is LEGO mincraft zombie figures that my aunt gave me. It is a gift I asked to aunt.

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