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What would you do if you were the richest person in the world? Explain.

박소은/2024-05-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If I have a lot of money I want to help the peoples that are hard to go company.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Sunny!
I'm pretty interested in what you wrote here.
It raises a lot of questions.
Let's talk more about it in class.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I have a lot of money I want to help the peoples that are hard to go company.
>> If I have a lot of money, I want to help the people who are having a hard time working in companies. 
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