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류건우/2024-05-28

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Q: What are some things to consider when living alone? A: I think the most important thing to consider is expense. If a person can't handle the expense, then that person would probably be expelled from the house. Also I think the chores and the food is what people need to consider.
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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I think the most important thing to consider is expense.
>>I think the most important thing to consider is the expense.

2. If a person can't handle the expense, then that person would probably be expelled from the house.
>>If a person couldn't handle the expense, then that person would probably be expelled from the house.

3. Also I think the chores and the food is what people need to consider.
>>Also, I think the chores and the food are what people should also consider.

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