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What are some challenges faced by historical relics and artifacts in your country?

김병욱/2024-05-28

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Most of our historical relics are made by nature-friendly. But historical place also changed rapidly. So i think it is very harmful for that place.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good day, Dan!
Nature has provided us with natural scenery which we are supposed to enjoy but these days, people are abusing their powers by taking and scratching off what nature has given us. A sad reality.
Aki~

Most of our historical relics are made by nature-friendly.
>>> Most of our historical relics were made by nature.

But historical place also changed rapidly.
>>> But historical places also changed rapidly.

So i think it is very harmful for that place.
>>>  CORRECT!
OR >>  I believe it's quite detrimental to that location
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