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Q: What’s the most memorable vacation you’ve had? A: I remember trip to Russia with my family. Because the aquarium and sea is very beautiful.

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Good day Yeong Min!

Thank you for doing your homework. Please try to be more expressive when you are writing and practice them to enhance your skils.

T. AKi~

I remember trip to Russia with my family.

>>> CORRECT!

Because the aquarium and sea is very beautiful.
>>> The aquarium and the sea was very beautiful.