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이한범/2024-09-27

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I enjoy a some one hour a week. I walk around official building with official workers.

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Hi, Han Beom! I always appreciate your time and effort accomplishing your homework. Have a great weekend!

~T. Jewel

I enjoy a some one hour a week.

>>I enjoy going out for about an hour a week.

I walk around official building with official workers.

>>I walk around the official building with other office workers.