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What are you passionate about?

박혜연/2024-05-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

When i draw picture that is wanted landscape, i’m passionate. And if i have hate friend, i want to win this friend. So i become passionate.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello, Hye Yeon! You really love drawing landscapes and when you have a friend you're not getting along with, you're determined to fix things. That's great!

~T. Jenna

When i draw picture that is wanted landscape, i’m passionate.

>>When I draw a picture of a wanted landscape, I'm passionate.

>> I'm passionate about drawing landscapes.
And if i have hate friend, i want to win this friend.

>>And if I have a friend I hate, I want to win this friend over.

>>And I am passionate about winning over a friend I hate when we're not getting along.

So i become passionate.

>>So, these are the things I am passionate about.