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Tell me about the most difficult thing that happened to you at work/school.

이진태/2024-05-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
When I just joined previous company, company prepared IPO. IPO is Initial Public Offer to stock market. Anyway, I was extremely busy that season. even I slept in a car or company. Because, I should make many documents.
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Hey JT! Thank you for sharing about the most difficult thing that happened to you at work. Hopefully this was a learning experience. 
~~Teacher Ryka^^

When I just joined previous company, company prepared IPO.
>>When I first joined my previous company, they were preparing for an IPO. 
IPO is Initial Public Offer to stock market.
>>An IPO, or Initial Public Offering, is when a company offers its shares to the stock market for the first time. 
Anyway, I was extremely busy that season. even I slept in a car or company. Because, I should make many documents.
>>During that period, I was extremely busy. I even slept in my car or at the office because I had to prepare many documents.
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