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What is the most sensible gift?

이진태/2024-05-24

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
These days, many Korean send a gift-coupon to others via Kakao talk as a gift. It's very easy to use, so many people like it. For example, If I send a Mcdonald coupon to my friend. my friend can use this coupon all Mcdonald branches.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey JT! I would agree to this. I heard a lot about these coupons and how people would actually prefer them more than anything. 
~~Teacher Ryka^^


These days, many Korean send a gift-coupon to others via Kakao talk as a gift.
>>These days, many Koreans send gift coupons to others via KakaoTalk as a gift. 
It's very easy to use, so many people like it.
>>CORRECT
For example, If I send a Mcdonald coupon to my friend. my friend can use this coupon all Mcdonald branches.
>>For example, if I send a McDonald's coupon to my friend, my friend can use this coupon at all McDonald's branches.
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