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임성준/2024-05-24

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How do you think your MBTI type would handle a zombie apocalypse? >>> As I told you earlier, my MBTI type would select a choice that sacrifice ourselves because it is comfortable for our mind. It is a better choice than a situation where we live instead of other people. But! MBTI is just MBTI. If I would be in that situation, I should save my family and myself at first! Sorry for that, It is natural nature of human. If MBTI is the cause, I would follow sacrificing choice but it is not. And I don't have any tiny thinking that I scrifice myself.
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Hello, Brian! Your thoughts highlight the complexity of decision-making. Prioritizing family and self-preservation is a natural instinct, transcending personality typing. Thanks for sharing your perspective. ^^
~ Teacher Maxine 

As I told you earlier, my MBTI type would select a choice that sacrifice ourselves because it is comfortable for our mind. 
>> As I told you earlier, my MBTI type would select a choice that sacrifices ourselves because it is comfortable for our mind.

It is a better choice than a situation where we live instead of other people. But! MBTI is just MBTI. 
>> It is a better choice than a situation where we live instead of other people. However, MBTI is just MBTI.

If I would be in that situation, I should save my family and myself at first! 
>> If I were in that situation, I should save my family and myself first!

Sorry for that, It is natural nature of human. 
>> Sorry for that, it is the natural instinct of humans.

If MBTI is the cause, I would follow sacrificing choice but it is not. And I don't have any tiny thinking that I scrifice myself.
>> If MBTI were the cause, I would follow the sacrificing choice, but it is not. And I don't have any tiny thought of sacrificing myself.
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