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Where do you think is the most dangerous place to go on a trip? Why?

차유진/2024-05-23

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I think the most dangerous place is Russia, Middle Eastern countries and Somalia. Because some countries are at war, some countries are not safe.
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Here's another edited composition for you, Yale!

Check out the small revisions, such as commas or the usage of other expressions, and take a look at how I reversed the order of the second sentence. Anyway, have a good one! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




                Where do you think is the most dangerous place to go on a trip? Why?



I think the most dangerous place is Russia, Middle Eastern countries and Somalia.
>> I think the most dangerous places are Russia, Middle Eastern countries, and Somalia.

Because some countries are at war, some countries are not safe.
>> OR: Some countries are unsafe and not peaceful because others are at war. 
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