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류건우/2024-05-23

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Q: What kind of car do you prefer to have in the future? A: I prefer a car with a good efficiency. I think the outfit of the car would matter to some people, but for me, the efficiency is the first thing to consider. Also, I want a car which more people can ride.
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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework!

~T. Divina^^

Here are some notes:

1. I prefer a car with a good efficiency.
>>I prefer a car with good efficiency.

2. I think the outfit of the car would matter to some people, but for me, the efficiency is the first thing to consider.
>>I think the appearance of the car would matter to some people, but for me, the efficiency is the first thing to consider.

3. Also, I want a car which more people can ride.
>>Also, I want a car which can accommodate more people.

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