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박시연/2024-05-23

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Hello T. Sharon! THis is my homework. I have had black head on my nose. It is still on my nose... so I take care of my skin. I usually use skin face lotion. It feels so cool. Good night! bye bye

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Irene!
You did an outstanding job today.
The corrections were really minor.
You used correct terms and expressions.
You did a really good job.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I have had black head on my nose.

>> I have had blackheads on my nose.
It is still on my nose... so I take care of my skin.

>> They are still on my nose so I take care of my skin.
I usually use skin face lotion.

>> I usually use lotion on my face.

It feels so cool.

>> Correct