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How do show your respect for other people?

박준현/2024-05-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I have 1 idea. I have 1 idea because I just do "hello". And no more manners. And what do you show? These are the reasons why I show manners for other people.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille

I have 1 idea.

>> CORRECT!

I have 1 idea because I just do "hello".

>> CORRECT!

OR >> I only have one idea because I just say "hello".

And no more manners.

>> Aside from that, there aren't any manners that I show.

And what do you show?

>> CORRECT!
These are the reasons why I show manners for other people.

>> CORRECT!