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류건우/2024-05-22
회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Q: What are the advantages of being rich?
A: I think the best advantage of being rich is that they can do things without limits.
People usually can't use their money all the time they want to spend it because if they do that, they'll be poor.
But rich people don't really need to worry that that much.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi, Paul!
2. People usually can't use their money all the time they want to spend it because if they do that, they'll be poor.
3. But rich people don't really need to worry that that much.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to consider:
1. I think the best advantage of being rich is that they can do things without limits.
>>CORRECT!
2. People usually can't use their money all the time they want to spend it because if they do that, they'll be poor.
>>People usually can't use their money all the time when they want to spend it because if they do that, they'll be poor.
3. But rich people don't really need to worry that that much.
>>But rich people don't really need to worry about that that much.
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