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양기연/2024-05-22

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My husband and I enjoyed hot springs most. I wanted him to experience Ryocan in this trip. I experienced it in the trip with my mom 10 years ago. My husband liked Ryocan and enjoyed hot springs day and night. I was glad he liked it.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Gi Yean!

I am happy that you enjoyed your vacation in Japan. Also, it's nice that your husband gained new experiences from this trip.

- T. Caitlyn

My husband and I enjoyed hot springs most.

>> My husband and I enjoyed the hot springs the most.

I wanted him to experience Ryocan in this trip.

>> CORRECT

I experienced it in the trip with my mom 10 years ago.

>> CORRECT

My husband liked Ryocan and enjoyed hot springs day and night.

>> CORRECT

I was glad he liked it.

>> CORRECT