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The world is full of trash, and one of them is electronic gadgets. what should be the best method to

김병욱/2024-05-22

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Wow, it's very tough question for me. I don't know what is best action for environment. But i think it is very important to the global issue.
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Good day, Dan!
Yeah, a very tough question that many people cannot answer. However, I am expecting a subjective opinion which means a thought that you can just share. Like for example: I think we can lessen electronic trash if we don't buy often.
Have a good day!
T. Aki~

Wow, it's very tough question for me.
>>> Wow, it's a very tough question for me.

I don't know what is best action for environment.
>>> I don't know what is the best action for the environment.

But I think it is very important to the global issue.
>>>  CORRECT!
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