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Are there any special traditions associated with different seasons in your country?

김일환/2024-05-21

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We have special traditions associated with different seasons. For example, There are hotest period in summer, we call it "SamBok", and Sambok is composed "chobok", "Joongbok","Malbok". It means, First-bok, Middle-bok. Last-bok. I don't know what "bok" means. There is words "In the heat of Sambok, even a cow's horn bends." Sambok starts in middle of July, it ends early August. Many korean eat chicken soup.(Actually our ancestor had eaten different food, but we never eat that food.)

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We have special traditions associated with different seasons.

- CORRECT.

For example, There are hotest period in summer, we call it "SamBok", and Sambok is composed "chobok", "Joongbok","Malbok".

- For example, there is the hottest period in summer; we call it "SamBok," and Sambok is composed of "chobok," "joongbok," and "malb.

It means, First-bok, Middle-bok. Last-bok.

- It means first-bok, middle-bok, and last-bok.

I don't know what "bok" means.

- CORRECT.

There is words "In the heat of Sambok, even a cow's horn bends."

- There is a quote, "In the heat of Sambok, even a cow's horn bends."

Sambok starts in middle of July, it ends early August.

- Sambok starts in the middle of July and ends early in August.

Many korean eat chicken soup.

- Many Koreans eat chicken soup.

(Actually our ancestor had eaten different food, but we never eat that food.)

- (Actually, our ancestors ate different foods, but we never ate those foods.)