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류건우/2024-05-21

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Q: When is the time to finally report a neighbor to the home association or to the authorities? A: I think if a neighbor disturbs people too much, it's fine to report them. They get their house or stay at home to be comfortable and release their stress, but if they can't do that, it's definitely a disturbance. So I think people should announce or be careful when they might be loud.
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Hi, Paul!

Thank you for answering your homework.

~T. Divina^^

Here are some considerations:

1. I think if a neighbor disturbs people too much, it's fine to report them.
>>CORRECT!

2. They get their house or stay at home to be comfortable and release their stress, but if they can't do that, it's definitely a disturbance.
>>People get their houses and stay at home to be comfortable and to release their stress, but if they can't do that, then it's definitely a disturbance.

3. So I think people should announce or be careful when they might be loud.
>>So, I think people should announce or inform their neighbors, or be careful when they might be loud.

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