For me, life means present. If we think a little more, it doesn't make sense that we are. It's a ridiculous sentence but anyway. So I think I should think my life as a miracle and thank for it. That's why I want to live my life well. My life is literally all I have and it's precious for me. So I want to enjoy my life well. It doesn't mean YOLO. I want to enjoy happiness for long time so I prepare for my future. I enjoy the process that I prepare for it and I think it will give me satisfaction in the end.

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For me, life means present. 

>> Correct!

OR: Life to me means being in the moment. 

If we think a little more, it doesn't make sense that we are. 

>> Correct!

OR: If we think about it more, it doesn't make sense that we are. 

It's a ridiculous sentence but anyway. 

>> Correct!

OR: It's a ridiculous sentence, but still. 

So I think I should think my life as a miracle and thank for it. 

>> Correct!

OR: So I think that I should view my life as a miracle and be grateful for it. 

That's why I want to live my life well. 

>> Correct!

OR: That is why I want to live my life well. 

My life is literally all I have and it's precious for me. 

>> Correct!

OR: My life is literally all I have, and it is precious to me. 

So I want to enjoy my life well. It doesn't mean YOLO. 

>> Correct!

OR: So I want to enjoy my life to the fullest. It does not mean YOLO. 

I want to enjoy happiness for long time so I prepare for my future. 

>> Correct!

OR: I want to enjoy happiness for a long time, so I'm planning for the future. 

I enjoy the process that I prepare for it and I think it will give me satisfaction in the end

>> Correct!

OR: I enjoy the process that I prepare for, and I believe that it will give me satisfaction in the end.