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박시연/2024-05-21

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Hello T. Sharon! This is my homework. I prefer beach to mountains. Because I love swimming, and seeing sunset at the beach. Also, I hate insects. But there so many insects in the mountains. So I like to go to the beach! Good night! bye bye

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Irene!
It's another interesting composition that you have shared.
I think you're becoming more comfortable with writing.
Keep practicing and never give up.
I'll talk to you on our next class!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I prefer beach to mountains.

>> I prefer the beach to the mountains.
Because I love swimming, and seeing sunset at the beach.

>> It's because I love swimming and watching the sunset at the beach.
Also, I hate insects.

>> I also hate insects.

But there so many insects in the mountains.

>> However, there are so many insects in the mountains.
So I like to go to the beach!

>> That's why I like going to the beach.