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What do you think makes a successful cabin crew team?

천세은/2024-05-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I would like to say communication makes a successful cabin crew team. If we let each others know the situation, for example any emergency situation or dangerous passenger or complains or needs, we can give a hand and solve the problems less stressfully. It allow us not only achieve exceptional service goal but also we can enjoy doing our duties while on boarding.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there, Rachel!

An open communication and upholding utmost professionalism is what is expected from you as a member of the cabin crew. If this kind of working relations and conditions are maintained, it will make your team dynamic and synergized.

You did a wonderful job on your second sentence! As you already know it, the answers demand longer explanations and in-depth discussions. Nevertheless, thank you very much for sending this answer to the homework question.

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See you!

-T. Donna~

I would like to say communication makes a successful cabin crew team.

>> Correct!

If we let each others know the situation, for example any emergency situation or dangerous passenger or complains or needs, we can give a hand and solve the problems less stressfully.

>> Correct! Very good sentence!

It allow us not only achieve exceptional service goal but also we can enjoy doing our duties while on boarding.

>> It allows us not only to achieve exceptional service goal but also enjoy doing our duties while on board.