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would you like to read more? What do you get out of reading?

박소은/2024-05-20

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I don't want to read more. Through reading, I learn about English, etc. by reading history or English books.

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Hi Sunny!
Thank you for the effort of writing about something new.
It's good for us to stretch our imagination once in a while.
You did great overall.
You were able to grasp the question well and you did your best to answer.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I don't want to read more.

>> Correct

Through reading, I learn about English, etc. by reading history or English books.

>> Through reading, I learn about English and others from history or English books.