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How do you show you care for old people?

박준현/2024-05-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I have no ideas. It's because I think I never trided take care for old people. But that's my ideas. Did you take care for old peoples? These are the reasons why I have no ideas for I did take care of old peoples.
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Hi, Henry!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Always do your best!
~ T. Camille


I have no ideas.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I don't have any ideas.
It's because I think I never trided take care for old people.
>> It's because I think I have never tried taking good care of old people.
But that's my ideas.
>> But that's my only idea.
Did you take care for old peoples?
>> Have you ever tried taking good care of old people?
These are the reasons why I have no ideas for I did take care of old peoples.
>> These are the reasons why I have no idea about taking good care of old people.

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