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What concerns or fears, if any, do you have about retirement?

박소은/2024-05-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I am worried about my retirement life. So I'm preparing for a second career as a psychologist.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

How is your day going, Anna?

It's commendable that you're taking proactive steps to plan for your future career. Pursuing a second career as a psychologist sounds like an exciting and fulfilling path to explore. Wishing you all the best in your endeavors!

~Kelly^^

I am worried about my retirement life.

>> Correct

OR:

>> I am concerned about my retirement years

So I'm preparing for a second career as a psychologist.

>> Correct

OR:

>> Therefore, I am preparing for a second career as a psychologist.