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How do global cuisines influence breakfast choices?
박순호/2024-05-20
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A traditional Korean breakfast consists of rice as a base, simple soup, and a few side dishes. The most common side dishes are kimchi and vegetables or salted fish, and may also include one or two meat side dishes.
However, currently, there are not many people who stick to this traditional breakfast, except for those in their 60s or older.
Most Koreans prefer a simple, Western-style breakfast considering their busy mornings.
In my case, I sometimes eat scorched rice or kimchi soup with rice for breakfast.
However in most cases, I eat boiled eggs, fruit, and some bread with milk or juice.
And sometimes I skip breakfast.
It is said that intermittent fasting is actually good for health.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hey there, Sun!
From the classic American pancakes and bacon to the Middle Eastern shakshuka, brunch menus reflect a fusion of global cuisines. This diversity caters to various palates and fosters cultural exchange and understanding through food.
- Kristine ^^
A traditional Korean breakfast consists of rice as a base, simple soup, and a few side dishes.
>> Correct.
The most common side dishes are kimchi and vegetables or salted fish, and may also include one or two meat side dishes.
>> The most common side dishes are salted fish or kimchi with veggies, though they can also have one or two side dishes with meat.
However, currently, there are not many people who stick to this traditional breakfast, except for those in their 60s or older.
However, currently, there are not many people who stick to this traditional breakfast, except for those in their 60s or older.
>> However, aside from those who are 60 years of age or older, very few people maintain this customary breakfast.
Most Koreans prefer a simple, Western-style breakfast considering their busy mornings.
Most Koreans prefer a simple, Western-style breakfast considering their busy mornings.
>> Most Koreans prefer a simple, Western-style breakfast, considering their busy mornings.
In my case, I sometimes eat scorched rice or kimchi soup with rice for breakfast.
In my case, I sometimes eat scorched rice or kimchi soup with rice for breakfast.
>> In my case, I occasionally have kimchi soup or scorched rice for breakfast.
However in most cases, I eat boiled eggs, fruit, and some bread with milk or juice.
However in most cases, I eat boiled eggs, fruit, and some bread with milk or juice.
>> However, in most cases, I eat boiled eggs, fruit, and some bread with milk or juice.
And sometimes I skip breakfast.
And sometimes I skip breakfast.
>> I sometimes skip breakfast.
It is said that intermittent fasting is actually good for health.
It is said that intermittent fasting is actually good for health.
>> There are claims that intermittent fasting has beneficial effects on health.
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