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Why is it illegal to download movies and music from the Internet?

김병욱/2024-05-20

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
Most movies and music have own intellectual property rights. it's the type of law. so illegal to download make a problem.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good day, Dan!
Yes, many people are fully aware of that, but hoe come, there are so many downloading websites on the internet where you can enjoy watching movies that were released three months ago. enjoy!
Aki~

Most movies and music have own intellectual property rights.
>>>  Most movies and music have their intellectual property rights.

it's the type of law. so illegal to download make a problem.
>>>  It's the type of law. so illegal to download makes a problem.

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