~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the main reasons of road accidents.
I think the main reasons of road accidents is traffic signal violation.
Many Koreans already know well, we can't wait a few seconds or minutes.
So, sometimes when we crossing the traffic light, run a red light or speeds up the car quickly and down the road.
Most problem is when a person and car accidents.
If, a person and a car crush, pedestrians will be hurt more seriously.
But, even if a pedestrian run a red light, the car driver will be punished.
I don't understand about this situation, anyway we should to keep the signal and drive carefully.
Hi, Keon!Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
What are the main reasons of road accidents?
I think the main reason of road accidents is traffic signal violation.
>> CORRECT!
Many Koreans already know well, we can't wait a few seconds or minutes.
>> CORRECT!
So, sometimes when we crossing the traffic light, run a red light or speeds up the car quickly and down the road.
>> So, sometimes when we cross the traffic light, we run a red light or speed up the car quickly down the road.
Most problem is when a person and car accidents.
>> The topmost problem is when a person meets a car accident.
If a person and a car crush, pedestrians will be hurt more seriously.
>> If a person and a car crash, pedestrians will be hurt more seriously.
OR >> If a person and a car collide, pedestrians will be hurt more seriously.
But, even if a pedestrian run a red light, the car driver will be punished.
>> But, even if a pedestrian runs a red light, the driver will be punished.
I don't understand about this situation, anyway we should to keep the signal and drive carefully.
>> I don't understand this situation, anyway we should understand the signals and drive carefully.