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What would be the impact of a "global internet failure" for two days?

김병욱/2024-05-17

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
If we can't use internet, i think most country have a panic. for example internet banking, international business doesn't work.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Dan!
Internet is one of the basic necessities in life nowadays, without it, Almost all thngs in the world will stop. An dyou are right, world will be in panic/
Have a nice day!
Aki~

If we can't use internet, i think most country have a panic.
>>> If we can't use the internet, I think most countries will panic.

for example internet banking, international business doesn't work.
>> For example; internet banking and international business don't work.
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