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do you prefer the mountains or the beach?

박소은/2024-05-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I prefer the beach more becase there is water in the beach and if I see the water I feel relexed. Also we can see lot of brids.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Sunny!
It's all about balance.
Be careful of your sentences.
The statements are very expressive.
I also agree with your point.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I prefer the beach more becase there is water in the beach and if I see the water I feel relexed.

>> I prefer the beach more because there is water in the beach and if I see the water, I feel relaxed.
Also we can see lot of brids.

>> We can also see a lot of birds.