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What are the most expensive fruits in Korea? Do you think they are worth the price?

차유진/2024-05-16

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Apples are the most expensive nowadays in Korea. It is about 4,000won per piece ($3~4) Apple farming is not good because abnormal climate. I understand the reasons but I think it is too expensive.
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Good evening, Yale!

Here's your revised homework. Please check the revisions below and alternative expressions. See you this Friday !


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                  What are the most expensive fruits in Korea? Do you think they are worth the price?


Apples are the most expensive nowadays in Korea.
>> CORRECT~~

It is about 4,000 won per piece ($3~4).
>> OR: A single apple is worth 4, 000 won or $3-4.

Apple farming is not good because abnormal climate.
>> Apple farming is not good because of the abnormal climate. 

I understand the reasons but I think it is too expensive.
>> OR: I understand why it's costly but I still think it's much. 
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