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What are the things you never do? Write at least two and explain Why you never do them.

차진혁/2024-05-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문
I never drink coke, because l don't like soda. I never make girl friend, because I like my mom more than girl friend. I never go to china, because China's president is very crazy.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Good Thursday evening, Jimmy!

Here's your corrected composition. Please go through the corrections, such as removing the comma before the word 'because'. Have a good one! 


Cheers,
Jean~~




              What are the things you never do? Write at least two and explain Why you never do them.


I never drink coke, because l don't like soda.
>> I never drink Coke because I don't like soda. 

I never make girl friend, because I like my mom more than girl friend.
>> I never have a girlfriend because I like my mom more than having a girlfriend.

I never go to china, because China's president is very crazy.
>> l never go to China because its president is very crazy. 


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