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박시연/2024-05-16

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

Hello T.sharon! This is my homework. I like better newspaper than magazines. Because I seldom read magazines that have many kinds. And I read news with my cell phone. bye bye! Good night!

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi Irene!
You would be able to see the differences in the way you write each time.
Learn from your mistakes and become better in expressing yourself.
Let's keep this going.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon

I like better newspaper than magazines.

>> I like newspapers more than magazines.
Because I seldom read magazines that have many kinds.

>> It's because I seldom read different kinds of magazines.
And I read news with my cell phone.
>> I read the news using my cell phone.