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양서윤/2024-05-14

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[ESSAY] In 3~5 sentences, answer the question below: >> Do you like meeting new people? No, I don’t like meeting new people. Because I think I’m an introvert person. So when I meet strangers, I’m shy. It is very difficult to me.
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Hello, Rachel!


Here's your corrected essay. I appreciate your sending it. Please go over the revisions, such as combining your first two sentences. Have a good evening there!


Cheers,
Jean~~




                            Do you like meeting new people?



No, I don’t like meeting new people.
Because I think I’m an introvert person.
>> No, I don’t like meeting new people because I think I’m an introvert. 

So when I meet strangers, I’m shy.
>> OR: That's why I feel self-conscious and reserved when I meet new faces. 

It is very difficult to me.
>> This is a troublesome and awkward situation for me. 

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