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김지숙/2024-05-14

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I went shopping with my family last weekend.Because I went to buy something to eat to go camping with my family.It was really fun

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Thank you so much for your time and effort, Shin Woo! See you in class!

- Teacher Angela

I went shopping with my family last weekend.
>> CORRECT
Because I went to buy something to eat to go camping with my family.
>> Because we needed to buy food for our camping trip.
It was really fun.
>> CORRECT