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Hello, I'm haeun.

이하은/2024-05-14

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I grew up in seoul, south korea. I moved to Australia for 5 days ago. Although I was in Korea, I worked at a cafe and restaurants. I Iearned coffee and latte art in korea really enjoy both customer service and making cofee. I do hope to have opportunity to work for you. I'm look forward to hearing from you!

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Hey, Ha Eun. How are you? Thank you for trusting me with this, don't worry, let's make this perfect. T. Linda

I grew up in seoul, south korea.

>> I grew up in Seoul, South Korea.

I moved to Australia for 5 days ago.

>>I moved to Australia 5 days ago.

Although I was in Korea, I worked at a cafe and restaurants.

Back in Korea, I worked at cafes and restaurants.

I Iearned coffee and latte art in korea really enjoy both customer service and making cofee.

>>I Iearned coffee and latte art in Korea and really enjoy both customer service and making coffee.

I do hope to have opportunity to work for you.

>>I hope to have opportunity to work for you.

I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

>> I'm looking forward hearing from you.