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Tulips?

이창노/2024-05-14

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I don't like tulips that much. I'm not have interesting the flowers. But, I often buy the flowers. Especially, May is family month in Korea. So, this month I sometimes bought flowers. And today I will buy the tulips. Because, today is rose day. Rose day is man give to roses to woman. Maybe it is sales gimmick. But if I don't give to roses, my wife is really sullen. So today I buy the tulips. My wife like the tulips.
강사님의 첨삭교정 내용
Hi Mathew!^^ 

Tulips are actually expensive here in the Philippines. 
I think tulips are elegant flowers. 
However, Iprefer the sunflower compared to tulip. 

Andrea

I don't like tulips that much.
>> Correct 

I'm not have interesting the flowers.
>> I am not interested in flowers.

But, I often buy the flowers.
>> But I often buy flowers. 

Especially, May is family month in Korea.
>> Especially that May is the family month in Korea. 

So, this month I sometimes bought flowers.
>> So this month, I bought flowers quite a lot. 

And today I will buy the tulips. Because, today is rose day.
>> And today, I will buy tulips because today is a rose day. 

Rose day is man give to roses to woman.
>> Rose Day is the day when a man gives a woman a flower. 

Maybe it is sales gimmick.
>> Maybe it is a sales gimmick.

But if I don't give to roses, my wife is really sullen.
>> But if I don't give roses to my wife she will be sullen. 

So today I buy the tulips.
>> So today, I bought tulips. 

My wife like the tulips.
>> My wife tulips. 

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