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김순님/2024-05-14

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I would tell my friend if I saw her husband’s cheating. She had better handle her crisis before her husband continues it. The longer his cheating, The deeper my friend’s sense of betrayal.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Ms. Sunny!

I know that it's too personal but I would be doing the same thing. (Sorry to his husband)

Now the question is, what if your friend is the one cheating?

Share your thoughts in class.

Aki~

I would tell my friend if I saw her husband’s cheating.

>>> I would tell my friend if I saw her husband cheating.

She had better handle her crisis before her husband continued it.

>>> CORRECT!

The longer his cheating, the deeper my friend’s sense of betrayal.

>>> The longer he is cheating, the deeper my friend's sens of betrayal.