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How will you differentiate the music of the past from the music of this generation?

김병욱/2024-05-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

First difference is music's speed. i think this generation's music engineers like uptempo. Second that is lyrics. in the past lyrics most important thing was made music.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hello Dan!

I agree with you, but which do you prefer?

I love the old songs or we could it 90's songs because the melody is almost the same. But that doesn't;t mean that I don;t enjoy listening to our modern songs.

Thank you for sharing your insights through writing.

Aki~

First difference is music's speed.

>>> The first difference is the speed of the music

>>> The first difference is the tempo.

I think this generation's music engineers like uptempo.

>>> CORRECT!

OR >>> I think music engineers of this generation prefer uptempo music

Second, that is lyrics.

>>> CORRECT!

in the past lyrics most important thing was made music.

>>> In the past, the most important thing in lyrics was to create music