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Describe your favorite seafood dish.

박혜연/2024-05-14

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

I’m crazy about sashimis. Above all, i love a Sliced Raw Flatfish. I love the taste with a good texture. Example, there are soft texture and firm texture!🤤🤤

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi, Hye Yeon! Nice choice! Sliced Raw Flatfish is delicious indeed, especially with its unique textures.

~T. Jenna

I’m crazy about sashimis.

Correct, or

>> Among various seafood dishes, I consider sashimis the best.

Above all, I love a Sliced Raw Flatfish.

Correct, or

>>Above everything else, my absolute favorite is Sliced Raw Flatfish.

I love the taste with a good texture.

>> I love its taste and good texture.

Example, there are soft texture and firm texture!

>>For example, it features both soft and firm textures.