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When do you think you’ll stop learning?

최미영/2024-05-13

회원님의 올려주신 영작문

The time I die must be the last moment I will stop learning. Life is the process of learning. As long as we live, we learn something new in every moment. Therefore, not only acquiring intellectual knowledge but also some wisdom of life is taught by everyday life.

강사님의 첨삭교정 내용

Hi there, Mika!

This is a straightforward and concise version of your usual answer in class. Nevertheless, it contains keywords that answer the question well.

Others stop learning by choice by shutting repudiating chances and opportunities that come their way. As a matter of fact, there are so many people who repel knowledge by not trying to understand new information or circumstances.

Anyway, the use of 'a' is non-specific or when a thing is `one kind of many things. Meanwhile. 'the' is a specific determiner used to mean only one kind.

Thank you so much and see you again tomorrow. Well done!

-T. Donna~

The time I die must be the last moment I will stop learning. Life is the process of learning.

>> The time I die must be the last moment I will stop learning. Life is a process of learning.

As long as we live, we learn something new in every moment.

>> Correct!

Therefore, not only acquiring intellectual knowledge but also some wisdom of life is taught by everyday life.

>> Correct! Very good sentence!